College Writing 101

My Theme is Crime & Justice and my argument is on how Laying off police officers can have catastrophic effects on the community and increase violence jeopardizing peoples lives.

Sources …

“118 Miami-Dade officers laid off “

” Economic Woes wears on U.S Police Department”

” Layoffs ripping through the US”

“Crime surge in Lawrence”

“I Did It” On November 29, 1988 the body of Viola Manville was found near them same railroad tracks where she walks to go home, her face pummeled, clothes torn off and BB gun pellets shot into her head. Glen Sterling admitted to the murder but wasn’t really the murderer he admitted to it because he didn’t want his brother to be Frank Sterling to get convicted for what he done to Viola.

“Loving Them To Them” This article caught my attention because its about teens getting put into boot camps but in the past 5 years there been deaths for many reasons from beatings, starvation, and emotional abuse and the therapy ain’t helping either. Some young teens deserve some kind of punishment but no one deserves to die at a young age especially in boot camp.

“A Daughters Revenge” This Article is about a girl named Brigitte Harris who cut off her fathers penis and he died because of that. He sexually abused her for years, in 2009 she was sentenced for second degree manslaughter and was sentenced for 5 to 15 years and this week she will have a parole hearing and i think she should be released with a little punishment like probation or house arrest because she was basically defending herself.

” Sensation Trials “  This Article talks about all the trials we had that shocked a lot of people and hurt some people. It talks about Dr. Conrad Murry who reportedly killed Micheal Jackson , The OJ trial, & The Menendez Brothers.

” Prison Without Walls “ This Article is about prisoners instead of incarcerating them in jail cells with bars have them do manual labor with GPS trackers, i don’t believe such thing will happen because some cases are more harsh then other but with technology they have now i don’t doubt it but i don’t agree with this thought at all.

      My Theme is About Crime & Justice I chose this topic because it has to do with what I want to major in college.  My Aunt was a probation officer in Providence, When i lived out there she took me to her office to help her out with a few things and to see how she worked. That’s when I caught interest in being a probation officer myself i was finishing my 10th grade year.

      I remember the day i went to my aunts office like it was yesterday, her office wasn’t small but yet to to big either. I would watch how she talked with the adults &  juveniles, and made sure they stayed on top of there community service hours, Most of her parole’s where young aged she would try and encourage them to stay out of trouble and would visit there homes to see how they doing even after there probation is over to make sure there in school, working and staying out of trouble. I took all the experience i can that day so i can take it with me throughout college and hopefully help me be ahead of my class and know a little more then the rest. My aunt was highly respected in the environment she worked  and by thier offenders she supervised, the tips she gave me was to always be organized when working in a office and properly dressed and on time to work at all times. It’s good to get along with them get to know them more but to make sure they get done what needs to be done so they won’t end up back in jail, but some can’t get away from the violence or trouble and end up back in jail. I feel like i can help young people stay out of trouble because growing up in Providence is hard to stay out of trouble so i can relate to them.

“Animals” This Article is mainly about a man named Terry Thompson who owned a barn full of animals from horses, pigs, lions and even a bear. In October 18, 2011 a neighbor, a sixty-four-year-old retired schoolteacher named Sam Kopchak first seen horses sprinting everywhere then he noticed in his yard there was a bear so he called the cops. When cops came they had to shoot the bear and captured all of the animals. Terry Thompson Killed himself before releasing all his animals free.Sam Kopchak, at the window of his small barn watched & listened to the cops gunfire on the animals.

My hometown was a wonderful (or choose your own adjective) place to grow up.

Friendly people, beaches everywhere & nice weather Dominican Republic.

Laci had a rather eccentric style.

Kanye West has an eccentric style tight clothes all tailored.

Mr. Brown is the worst teacher I’ve ever had

just gives us an assignment with no explanation to it.

The room seemed very institutional.

the class had a strict teacher & there where no cell phones felt very institutional.

“The Doctor Will Sue You Now“ Dr. Arnold Klein is a 67 year old man and the father of Botox he’s famous for treating many celebrites we know, he was allegedy got micheal jackson addicted to narcotic Demerol. One of his office managers tried to ruin him by releasing Jackson’s medical records in the manslaughter trial that Dr. conrad was in but Conrad got 4 years in jail for his involvment. He was declared for bankruptcy in January 2011 and put one of his homes on the market, Klien said “I’ve given my life for other people and have gotten screwed for it “